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For *ICanReachTheStars. The preview is a bad picture (I'm sorry) of how it looked when I wrote it out. She asked for a story with her original characters: ...the girl is named Karu, the boy named Kurai. The background story is that the girl is in love with the boy. One day the boy gets dragged into a pond by a black swan, and turns into one himself. The girl jumps after him and turns into a human white swan. With magic powers she saves him and they keep living togheter, seen by others as a black and a white swan, while they see each other as half swan-half human.

I tried to follow it as closely as I could. Hopefully, she'll like it! (I'm worried to death about this! :nuu:)


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Solarune Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012   Writer
Ooh :eager: It's so interesting to see prose from you; you handle it beautifully, without any over-description. I love the mythical feel and the voice of the storyteller, the way s/he breaks out of it to directly address the reader – brilliant. :)
Vigilo Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012  Student Writer
Oh, gosh. :blush: Is this some sort of not-so-secret mission for attempting to turn V permanently pink and gooey from compliments? :noes:

I've only done one prose story before (about Constantinople, no less, and its fall :paranoid:) and it was not that great, so I'm glad to hear this works for you! Thank you so, so much. I had to put that in bold because I don't have my brain with me, so I can't leap compliments on you, so. Bold text. And lots of emotes. :glomp: :heart:

:iconteamoplz: :icongwompplz:
Solarune Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012   Writer
Haha, well really a mission to finally get around to the devs in my inbox, but shh – that works, too. :heart: (So long as you don't go permanently gooey, else you wouldn't be able to type. :noes:)

You're very very welcome. I really enjoyed it. :D :tighthug:
Vigilo Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012  Student Writer
So do I reply or not to reply? :noes: I don't want to fill up your inbox! :nuu: (And seriously, your inbox sounds scary and I don't want it. And, aww, don't worry, I shan't go permanently gooey. Or, all parts except my hands and brain (though isn't the brain gooey anyway?) shall go goeey, so I'll still be able to type. :giggle:

:glomp: :heart:
Solarune Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2012   Writer
No, reply away! :lol: I don't want to stop getting comments. I just may take agggess to reply. XD
I don't imagine so. It is scary. :noes: I need to upgrade the machete I use to hack through it. And possibly employ an army of ninjas to help me. XD
*now visualising V as a pile of goo with just hands and a gooey brain* :paranoid:
Vigilo Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012  Student Writer
Oh, good! That's fine, I'm pretty much the same lately. :lol:

Nice! XD I'm just slow on everything because I'm terribly lazy. It's not that I have a lot of messages to reply to, it's just that most of them are really, really long. :XD: NINJAS! :iconninjalaplz:

:iconheartlaplz: :tighthug:
Solarune Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012   Writer
I'm with you about the really really long thing. :XD: I love long comments, but sometimes it's like replying to 10 messages at once. :P
Vigilo Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Student Writer
Tell me about it! But it must be worse for you. :fear: (And I STILL have to reply to your awesome comments! Would you mind if I just said 'thank you so much' (or variation) plus a love/gwomp/some sort of expressive emote/plz? My thesaurus is running out of synonyms for 'awesome'. :giggle:) I know - everyone should use bullet points! Rainbow ones!

... but I LIKE the really really long messages, that's the problem with me. :P
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IndigoSkyes Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ahhh this is so good.
Vigilo Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you so much! :happybounce: :heart:
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